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Chapter 1 The Betrayal 

Chapter 1 The Betrayal 

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The moment Dana Archer regained her hearing, the first person she wanted to share the good news with was her fiancéHunter Gedge

But just as she unlocked her phone screen, a message popped up from one of Hunter’s buddies, Dana, Hunter’s been kidnapped! You need to get here now!” 

Panic gripped her. Dana raced to the bank, withdrew a large sum of money, and rushed to the address she was givena decrepit, abandoned warehouse on the outskirts of town

But the moment she reached the entrance, someone kicked her hard, sending her crashing through the warehouse doors. They slammed shut behind her

Seconds later, several large dogs lunged at her, their teeth tearing into her skin

They tore into her, jaws ripping through flesh. Blood pooled around her as her screams echoed off the walls

Yet through the pain, she shouted desperately, I brought the money! You can do whatever you want to mejust please, let my fiancé go!” 

Her plea was met with loud, mocking laughter from outside the door. Hunter, have you seen how silly she looks? That fool actually fell for it again. Still worried about you even after all that. What a pathetic little thing. Maybe you should just give her a shotshe’s clearly devoted.” 

Another voice scoffed. Are you kidding? Hunter’s in love with Celine. This bitch? Only good enough to be dog meat.” 

Hunter’s voice followed, low and cold. Keep it down. She might hear us.” 

But another voice chuckled. Hear us? She’s deaf, remember? You asked us to slip that hearingloss drug into her food for three years. She’s been deaf ever sincehow’s she going to hear anything?” 

Dana heard everything. The moment she did, it felt like she had fallen into a frozen abyss

Three years ago, she’d been a rising stara prodigy pianist with original compositions people adored

Piano was her soul, but she was deaf

She wasn’t Beethovenshe couldn’t compose music after losing her hearing

She used to think it was the car crash that stole her senses. Celine Feron had lost her memory in the same accident. Dana assumed it was all just a cruel twist of fate

Now she knew better. The man she loved had orchestrated it all

Their socalled love story had been a cruel charade from the start

Her heart shattered with the weight of betrayal

Outside, the laughter continued rolling in

Gosh, this is hilarious. What time is this? Our thirtythird con? I’ve honestly lost count.” 

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Yup. Girl’s a real sucker. Still believes us after all this time. Remember when Hunter told her he was too drunk to drive, and she carried him ten miles home on foot?” 

That’s nothing. Not as wild as the hotel setup. Hunter said he was waiting in a hotel suite. When she got therebam! Some stranger in the room. She barely escaped being violated, and we still managed to twist it around and frame her for cheating” 

She even begged him for forgiveness. I’ll never forget that pathetic scene. Man, it still amused me every time I thought of this.” 

Those words continued to drift into Dana’s ears

Dana trembled on the floor, her body shaking uncontrollably. 

She thought back to that night at the hotelHunter had texted her saying he was drunk and couldn’t get home. He asked her to meet him at the hotel

Dana packed some hangover broth and rushed over. But when she opened the hotel room door, it wasn’t Hunter. It was a huge, burly man

She’d tried to run. That hulking man grabbed her, threw her onto the bed, straddled on top of her, and tore at her clothes

Dana had screamed, begging him with teary eyes to let her go. He hit heragain and againlaughing cruelly. Slut! Some guy told me there’d be a hot chick here tonight. I paid big for this, sweetheart

Don’t act all high and mighty. You get paid for it, don’t you?” 

Dana couldn’t even hear him; she was deaf. But she could feel everythingthe rage, the violation, the shame

She begged himpleaded with everything she hadfor mercy. But the man didn’t care. He slapped her, hard, again and again

He ruthlessly yanked at her clothes, tearing them apart. Just as Dana felt the last shred of hope slipping away, as terror swallowed her whole, the door burst open, and Hunter barged in

Dana, broken and sobbing, tried to run into his armsbut he shoved her away

Expressionless, he typed out a message on his phone. I treated you so well, and this is how you repay me? How could you betray me? You’re disgusting.” 

Dana had always hated being misunderstood, especially by the one person she loved most

She tried to explain, begging him to trust her

But now she finally understoodit had all been a setup. Hunter knew the truth. He knew she hadn’t cheated

It had all been stagedhis sick little performance to amuse himself

Why? What had she done to deserve this

They had grown up together. Childhood sweethearts, inseparable since they were kids. What changed

The dogs were still biting her, but the pain in her heart drowned out the physical wounds

She lay there, trembling, numb. Silent

She’s awfully quiet,” someone said outside the door. Think the dogs killed her?” 

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No way. A few bites won’t kill her. And even if she died, she deserves it. She’s the one who took Celine out that daycaused the crash, made Celine lose her memory, and made her forget Hunter.” 

And remember what the doctor said? After Dana fell in the hospital that time, Celine started remembering things. Pain and trauma can trigger her memories

Exactly. You think Hunter would’ve lowered himself to date her if it weren’t for that? Please. The only reason he put up with her was to help Celine recover. She’s not even worth the trouble. But if she dies and Celine sees it? Who knowsmaybe she’ll remember everything.” 

Each word stabbed deeper than the last. Tears streamed down her cheeks

So that was it. Everything that had happenedall of itwas for Celine

She and Hunter had been engaged since their comingofage, practically promised to each other since childhood. Everyone thought they were meant to be

Back then, Hunter’s world had revolved around her. Dana was all that he could see. They were the couple everyone believed was 

destined to last forever

But everything changed when Celine entered their lives. Hunter became someone she no longer recognized. The warmth in his eyes vanished, replaced by a coldness that only melted for Celine

Dana had begun to believe the engagement was over

Then the accident happened. Celine lost her memory

And in a move that stunned everyone, especially Dana, Hunter didn’t stay by Celine’s side. Instead, he turned to Danathe girl who had gone deaf from that very same accidentand proposed

She’d been so thrilled that night she couldn’t sleep. Dana thought, finally, her love had come full circle

But none of it had been real. It was all part of Hunter’s schemea cruel plan to keep Dana close, to hurt her again and again, hoping her suffering might somehow jog Celine’s memory

Over the next three years, Hunter tricked her 33 times. He toyed with her like she was a pawn in his twisted game

He even drugged herkept her deaf for three years

Dana had laid her heart bare and loved him with every inch of her soul. And he never once truly cared. It was a vicious, unforgivable 

joke

If Hunter loved Celine so much, he could have her. She was done

The dogs were still biting at her limbs, but something primal surged inside Dana. She flung them off with all her might

Bloodied and gasping, she stumbled to her feet. Her eyes landed on a wooden chair nearby. She grabbed it and hit those dogs

When someone’s staring death in the face, adrenaline can unlock a terrifying kind of strength

Once. Twice. Over and over

She didn’t stop swinging until the dogs lay on the ground, whimpering, no longer a threat

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And then, she collapsed too

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With the last ounce of strength she had, Dana pulled out her phone and made a call to an old friend. Do you still have that private Island for sale?she asked, her voice ragged. I’ll take it.” 

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