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Chapter 10 

Even though he fought it for weeks, there was only one way this was ever gonna end

Prison

And he was taking the woman he loved mostdown with him

Of course, the day the sentence was handed down, he collapsed right there in the courtroomjust dropped to the floor, speechless

His mom’s lips were trembling

This has to be a mistake! My son would never do something like this!” 

That woman went full psycho on him, kicking and punching like she’d lost her mind

If I go to jail, what the hell happens to my daughter?!” 

This was your messwhy should I be the one to suffer for it?!” 

I didn’t do anything, and now I’m screwed because of you!” 

She even dropped to her knees right in front of me, begging

Pleasewhatever you want, just tell me.” 

My little girl needs her mom.” 

I’ll 

pay, anything I can afford.” 

She wanted to sweep it all under the rug

I stared her down, cold as ice

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You Send Yo 

Chapter 10 

Did 

you ever stop to think about the family you were destroying while you were screwing 

around with someone else’s husband?” 

My husband finally snapped out of his shock and broke down sobbing

Don’t leave meI was wrong, okay?” 

We’ve been married for so many yearsyou can’t just turn your back on me like this!” 

Then his mom spun around and glared at me, her voice shaking with desperation

You heartless bitchhe’s my only son! You can’t let them lock him up!” 

I looked her dead in the eye

She grabbed my arm and hissed through clenched teeth

I took care of you for years. I gave you everything.‘ 

You’ve got nothing to complain aboutyou ended up with two sons, both thanks to my boy. Doesn’t that count for anything?” 

I kept my face stone cold, watching them squirm

That woman suddenly jumped to her feet, her eyes burning into me

Why the hell do you get to cheat and walk away scotfree, but I’m the one getting dragged through the mud?!” 

If you don’t sign the forgiveness papers, you’re destroying two families!” 

My husband whipped his head up, eyes full of panic

Please forgive me. I swear I’ll make it up to you.” 

I’ll love your son like he’s my own, I promise.” 

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You Send You 

Chapter 10 

I let my eyes pass over all of themso pathetic, so desperate

Once I’d had enough of the show, I finally spoke

Do I look like some bleeding heart saint to you?” 

Everyone pays for what they’ve done. No exceptions.” 

Didn’t take long before they were all behind bars

And the kids

Full custodymine

After that mess, all I could think about was making more money

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Spoiled by Neglect

Spoiled by Neglect

Status: Ongoing

Part 1: The Final Moments

Evelyn dies in misery — paralyzed, helpless, lying in her own filth in a nursing home.
Her only visitor is her daughter Naomi, who stares down at her with hatred instead of love.

“You only sent me two hundred dollars a month at NYU,” Naomi sneers, waving a receipt. “So guess what? I’ll buy you the cheapest urn I can find — for two hundred.”
Her laughter echoes as she leaves. Evelyn tries to speak, to explain, but only wheezing escapes her lips.
And just like that, she dies — alone, heartbroken, branded a monster mother.


Part 2: The Funeral Lies

Even in death, there is no peace.
At her funeral, whispers swirl like smoke:

“She was so cold.”
“Starved her daughter through college.”
“All she ever cared about was money.”
No one knows the truth. No one wants to.
Because the truth is uglier than the lie — and it starts with her husband.


Part 3: The Hidden Truth

Evelyn had sent her daughter three thousand dollars every month.
But her “honest” husband, Crane Holloway, had stolen twenty-four hundred of it each time, sending only six hundred to Naomi.
Then, to make it worse, he told their daughter that Evelyn had cut her allowance — painting her as stingy and cruel.
And where did the money go?
Straight into funding his secret mistress and their second family across town.


Part 4: The Rebirth

The last breath fades…
Then she wakes up — back in her younger body — the exact day she’s about to send Naomi her first college allowance.
For a moment, disbelief floods her chest.
Then fury replaces it.
This time, she swears, no one will take advantage of her again.


Part 5: The Manipulator Returns

“Babe, just Venmo me the cash and I’ll send it all to Naomi in one go,”
Crane calls casually from the kitchen, wearing that same fake smile he always did — the “good guy” act that once fooled her.
He even adds, “I’ll throw in an extra two thousand so she doesn’t have to penny-pinch.”
Last lifetime, that charm had worked.
This lifetime? Not a chance.


Part 6: The Moment of Clarity

Looking at him now — the man she once called her soulmate — Evelyn sees every lie, every manipulation, every stolen cent.
His eyes give him away — the greed, the hidden calculation, the smirk behind his “loving” mask.
This was the exact moment her downfall began before.
Not this time.

“Sure,” she says softly. “Three thousand.”
He beams, believing he’s fooled her again.


Part 7: The Parasite’s Routine

Crane launches into his next act:

“Hey babe, mind shooting me another five grand from your checking? I’m tapped out — need some new fall gear.”
He rubs his hands together, playing the helpless husband card.
Evelyn has heard it all before — every excuse, every “you’re too busy to handle money.”
She remembers it now: how he’d insisted she let him manage her paycheck “for the family.”
She’d been a full-time worker, the only breadwinner, while he sat at home pretending to be her financial protector.
He wasn’t managing her money — he was bleeding her dry.


Part 8: The Realization

In her past life, Evelyn had been blind — trusting him completely, believing his charm and his lies.
But now, reborn and awake, she sees every red flag for what it is.
She’s not the naive woman who funded his affairs.
She’s the woman who came back to take everything he stole — with interest.


Part 9: The Shift

“Fine,” she says flatly.
Crane’s eyes light up, mistaking her calm for submission. He tries to hug her, confident that she’s still “his Evelyn.”
But when he reaches out — she steps aside.
His arms catch only air.
The confusion on his face is priceless.
“What’s your problem? I slaved over dinner and you won’t even let me touch you?”
Evelyn doesn’t even look at him.
“No problem,” she says coldly. “She’s my daughter. I’ll send her the money myself.”


Part 10: The Reborn Woman

And just like that, the tables turn.
For the first time in twenty years, Evelyn keeps her own money — and her power.
She’s no longer a victim of lies or manipulation.
This time, she’s the one writing the story.
And before she’s done, every liar — her husband, his mistress, their secret family — will pay for what they did.
Because this life, Evelyn Holloway isn’t dying in filth.
She’s living for vengeance.

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