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Spoiled by Neglect 24

When my coworkers found out I’d gotten into a prestigious university, they were completely floored

During lunch break, everyone was chatting and shooting the breeze

One coworker joked: If I’d done as well as you on those tests, my parents would’ve put me on a pedestal.” 

You sure you weren’t adopted? How could they be so heartless?” 

I smiled sadly. I wished I was adopted

At least then it wouldn’t hurt so much

But my face was basically a carbon copy of Mom’swe wouldn’t need a DNA test to prove I was definitely hers

An older coworker came over and patted my shoulder consolingly

Kiddo, depending on yourself isn’t so bad. Getting realworld experience early, growing up fastthat’s good.” 

Maybe your mom’s going through something tough?” 

What could someone as controlling as her possibly be struggling with

I mentally rolled my eyes while keeping my expression neutral

All the hurt I’d been bottling up suddenly found an outlet

Fine, let’s say she’s going through something

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Being selfreliant is pretty great

I’m working a summer job here for two months and can earn $3,000

If I perform well, there’s even a $500 bonus. That would cover my entire first year of college living expenses, and the rest could go toward tuition

Once I get to college, I’ll look for parttime work and gradually pay back some of the tuition 

costs

Looking at it that way, the future didn’t seem so bleak

The experienced workers mentioned that universities have needbased aid and merit scholarships, plus you can apply for student loans

Her son was taking the SATS this year too, but barely scraped by with mediocre scoresonly got into a regular state school

She was still thrilled about it though

The better the school, the more money they give you.” 

If my kid had grades like yours, I’d sell everything I owned to support him.” 

With my coworkersencouragement, I felt more and more confident

My future’s definitely going to get better and better

When the break ended, I stepped onto my university campus just like I’d hoped

The factory owner, after learning about my SAT scores, even gave me a sponsorship bonus

And just like that, I actually managed to pay off all my tuition! What’s more, I still had almost $750 left over

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First thing I did at college was research all the different needbased aid and merit 

scholarships I could qualify for

But when I went to apply for financial aid, I was told I didn’t meet the assistance requirements

The advisor handling aid distribution glared at me furiously: Students like you are just plain greedy.” 

Character matters just as much as gradescollege is about building moral integrity too.” 

I was stunned. How was applying for $650 in poverty assistance making me greedy

I argued back: What gives you the right to say that? I’m not trying to scam anyone.” 

The advisor sneered: Still playing dumb? We found large transfers in your bank account.” 

Recently, the school had cracked down hard on financial aid fraud

Tons of rich kids had been pretending to be poor to get assistance money

Once they got the cash, they’d blow it on designer shoes and bags, then post about it online

One notorious rich kid at school had somehow gotten aid too

He’d bragged on Tik Tok that the money wouldn’t even cover his family’s dog food budgetall he had to do was make up some sob stories, play the victim, and they just handed him free money

Meanwhile, students who actually needed help missed out because they didn’t know how to work the system

Someone screenshot his post and it went viral, causing a massive uproar

Students from universities everywhere started calling out how their aid programs were just subsidizing spoiled rich kids

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Really poor students didn’t even know this money existed

School administrators saw the backlash and held special meetings to fix the mess

This round of poverty assistance screening was especially strictthey even checked studentsbank accounts and transaction histories

But Those four words large transfershit me really like a thunderclap

… 

I stared at him, confused: What transfers? I only have one bank account with about $750 left in it.” 

That’s from my summer job wages.” 

When the advisor saw I wouldn’t come clean, he pulled out evidence

This Citibank card ending in 8890 had $200,000 transferred into it a year ago.” 

It’s in your name. Still gonna deny it?” 

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Spoiled by Neglect

Spoiled by Neglect

Status: Ongoing

Part 1: The Final Moments

Evelyn dies in misery — paralyzed, helpless, lying in her own filth in a nursing home.
Her only visitor is her daughter Naomi, who stares down at her with hatred instead of love.

“You only sent me two hundred dollars a month at NYU,” Naomi sneers, waving a receipt. “So guess what? I’ll buy you the cheapest urn I can find — for two hundred.”
Her laughter echoes as she leaves. Evelyn tries to speak, to explain, but only wheezing escapes her lips.
And just like that, she dies — alone, heartbroken, branded a monster mother.


Part 2: The Funeral Lies

Even in death, there is no peace.
At her funeral, whispers swirl like smoke:

“She was so cold.”
“Starved her daughter through college.”
“All she ever cared about was money.”
No one knows the truth. No one wants to.
Because the truth is uglier than the lie — and it starts with her husband.


Part 3: The Hidden Truth

Evelyn had sent her daughter three thousand dollars every month.
But her “honest” husband, Crane Holloway, had stolen twenty-four hundred of it each time, sending only six hundred to Naomi.
Then, to make it worse, he told their daughter that Evelyn had cut her allowance — painting her as stingy and cruel.
And where did the money go?
Straight into funding his secret mistress and their second family across town.


Part 4: The Rebirth

The last breath fades…
Then she wakes up — back in her younger body — the exact day she’s about to send Naomi her first college allowance.
For a moment, disbelief floods her chest.
Then fury replaces it.
This time, she swears, no one will take advantage of her again.


Part 5: The Manipulator Returns

“Babe, just Venmo me the cash and I’ll send it all to Naomi in one go,”
Crane calls casually from the kitchen, wearing that same fake smile he always did — the “good guy” act that once fooled her.
He even adds, “I’ll throw in an extra two thousand so she doesn’t have to penny-pinch.”
Last lifetime, that charm had worked.
This lifetime? Not a chance.


Part 6: The Moment of Clarity

Looking at him now — the man she once called her soulmate — Evelyn sees every lie, every manipulation, every stolen cent.
His eyes give him away — the greed, the hidden calculation, the smirk behind his “loving” mask.
This was the exact moment her downfall began before.
Not this time.

“Sure,” she says softly. “Three thousand.”
He beams, believing he’s fooled her again.


Part 7: The Parasite’s Routine

Crane launches into his next act:

“Hey babe, mind shooting me another five grand from your checking? I’m tapped out — need some new fall gear.”
He rubs his hands together, playing the helpless husband card.
Evelyn has heard it all before — every excuse, every “you’re too busy to handle money.”
She remembers it now: how he’d insisted she let him manage her paycheck “for the family.”
She’d been a full-time worker, the only breadwinner, while he sat at home pretending to be her financial protector.
He wasn’t managing her money — he was bleeding her dry.


Part 8: The Realization

In her past life, Evelyn had been blind — trusting him completely, believing his charm and his lies.
But now, reborn and awake, she sees every red flag for what it is.
She’s not the naive woman who funded his affairs.
She’s the woman who came back to take everything he stole — with interest.


Part 9: The Shift

“Fine,” she says flatly.
Crane’s eyes light up, mistaking her calm for submission. He tries to hug her, confident that she’s still “his Evelyn.”
But when he reaches out — she steps aside.
His arms catch only air.
The confusion on his face is priceless.
“What’s your problem? I slaved over dinner and you won’t even let me touch you?”
Evelyn doesn’t even look at him.
“No problem,” she says coldly. “She’s my daughter. I’ll send her the money myself.”


Part 10: The Reborn Woman

And just like that, the tables turn.
For the first time in twenty years, Evelyn keeps her own money — and her power.
She’s no longer a victim of lies or manipulation.
This time, she’s the one writing the story.
And before she’s done, every liar — her husband, his mistress, their secret family — will pay for what they did.
Because this life, Evelyn Holloway isn’t dying in filth.
She’s living for vengeance.

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