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Spoiled by Neglect 26

Spoiled by Neglect 26

When I got home, the living room was packed with relatives

They’d already set up a funeral altar. Mom’s black and white portrait sat in the center, surrounded by white mourning banners hanging from the walls

Funeral home staff were waiting outside, smoking cigarettes

My heart plummeted as I charged into the house like a woman possessed

Seeing me return, Uncle Marcus immediately grabbed me and forced me to kneel in front of the altar

He slapped me hard across the face, his eyes red as he yelled: So you finally decided to show up, you heartless brat. Your mom was calling for you when she died.” 

Youdidn’t even call her once in two years.” 

Before he could finish, he broke down sobbing

Several aunts took turns trying to comfort him, but ended up crying themselves

I knelt before the altar, desperately kowtowing to Mom

Amid all the wailing, a snide voice drifted from the couch

Oh look, she took all the family money and went off living it up somewhere.” 

They say you raise kids to take care of you when you’re old, but turns out she raised an ungrateful little snake.” 

That nasty voiceI’d never forget it as long as I lived

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Years ago, when Mom took me to Dad’s hometown for Christmas, I’d gotten scolded for an entire hour just for taking a chicken leg at dinner

Mom had flipped the table and brought me straight home

We never went back to Dad’s hometown after that

Never saw that old witch I was supposed to call Grandmaagain either

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Now, with Mom’s suspicious death, she was back to stir up trouble

The second she finished talking, Aunt Cheryl lunged at her, yanking her hair and slapping her face

You old hag, my sister died because of your harassment, and you still have the nerve to show up here?” 

She bought her own life insurance, and you people still want the payout? Have some shame!” 

Grandma dodged while screaming back at Aunt Cheryl

What life insurance money? That’s all my son’s money.” 

She got sick and died on her ownall remaining assets go to my son. None of your damn business.” 

Aunt Cheryl was a fighter. Grandma couldn’t keep up, and her mouth was already swelling from the hits

Uncle and aunts from Dad’s side rushed over to break it up unfairly, while my other aunts jumped into the fray

The funeral parlor turned into complete chaos

I just knelt in front of Mom’s altar, crying until my heart felt like it would tear apart

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The crying, cursing, and chaos quickly drew the neighborsattention

More people meant even more chaos

Looking around the messy funeral parlor, I finally spotted Dad by the master bedroom door

Mom was already dressed in her burial clothes, lying on the bed in the master bedroom

Dad’s face showed no trace of griefhe was bent over comforting a crying little boy beside him

The boy looked about four or five years old and resembled Dad quite a bit

Behind him stood a woman dressed very elegantly, impatiently lecturing Dad

Isn’t the house supposed to be yours? Didn’t your wife transfer it to you before she died?” 

Derek, Bobby’s starting elementary school soon. Are you going to handle this or not?” 

Seeing this mother and son, I finally understood what everyone in the living room had been fighting about

Dad’s mistress had given him a son, and he’d been racking his brains to funnel our family’s money to them

All that money he’d supposedly sent back to his hometown was just shuffling funds aroundit all went to this mother and son

Now that Mom was gone, they were making their move on the house

Dad whispered reassurances to the woman: I just can’t find the deed yet. Once I do, we’ll get it transferred over.” 

She’s dead, so the house should rightfully pass to me.” 

Don’t worry, Bobby’s schooling won’t be delayed.” 

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Uncle Marcus noticed the situation and flew into a rage, rushing over to kick Dad: The house was my sister’s premarital propertyit can only go to Delia.” 

If you dare give it to this homewrecker, I’ll hang myself right here.” 

Dad stopped pretending then, shielding his mistress and illegitimate son behind him, sneering: I’m the heir to her estate. That house is mine, and I can give it to whoever I want.” 

Y’all better cut the crap. Watch outif you don’t, I’ll dump her ashes in the toilet and flush’em. None of you’ll even have a place to mourn her!” 

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Spoiled by Neglect

Spoiled by Neglect

Status: Ongoing

Part 1: The Final Moments

Evelyn dies in misery — paralyzed, helpless, lying in her own filth in a nursing home.
Her only visitor is her daughter Naomi, who stares down at her with hatred instead of love.

“You only sent me two hundred dollars a month at NYU,” Naomi sneers, waving a receipt. “So guess what? I’ll buy you the cheapest urn I can find — for two hundred.”
Her laughter echoes as she leaves. Evelyn tries to speak, to explain, but only wheezing escapes her lips.
And just like that, she dies — alone, heartbroken, branded a monster mother.


Part 2: The Funeral Lies

Even in death, there is no peace.
At her funeral, whispers swirl like smoke:

“She was so cold.”
“Starved her daughter through college.”
“All she ever cared about was money.”
No one knows the truth. No one wants to.
Because the truth is uglier than the lie — and it starts with her husband.


Part 3: The Hidden Truth

Evelyn had sent her daughter three thousand dollars every month.
But her “honest” husband, Crane Holloway, had stolen twenty-four hundred of it each time, sending only six hundred to Naomi.
Then, to make it worse, he told their daughter that Evelyn had cut her allowance — painting her as stingy and cruel.
And where did the money go?
Straight into funding his secret mistress and their second family across town.


Part 4: The Rebirth

The last breath fades…
Then she wakes up — back in her younger body — the exact day she’s about to send Naomi her first college allowance.
For a moment, disbelief floods her chest.
Then fury replaces it.
This time, she swears, no one will take advantage of her again.


Part 5: The Manipulator Returns

“Babe, just Venmo me the cash and I’ll send it all to Naomi in one go,”
Crane calls casually from the kitchen, wearing that same fake smile he always did — the “good guy” act that once fooled her.
He even adds, “I’ll throw in an extra two thousand so she doesn’t have to penny-pinch.”
Last lifetime, that charm had worked.
This lifetime? Not a chance.


Part 6: The Moment of Clarity

Looking at him now — the man she once called her soulmate — Evelyn sees every lie, every manipulation, every stolen cent.
His eyes give him away — the greed, the hidden calculation, the smirk behind his “loving” mask.
This was the exact moment her downfall began before.
Not this time.

“Sure,” she says softly. “Three thousand.”
He beams, believing he’s fooled her again.


Part 7: The Parasite’s Routine

Crane launches into his next act:

“Hey babe, mind shooting me another five grand from your checking? I’m tapped out — need some new fall gear.”
He rubs his hands together, playing the helpless husband card.
Evelyn has heard it all before — every excuse, every “you’re too busy to handle money.”
She remembers it now: how he’d insisted she let him manage her paycheck “for the family.”
She’d been a full-time worker, the only breadwinner, while he sat at home pretending to be her financial protector.
He wasn’t managing her money — he was bleeding her dry.


Part 8: The Realization

In her past life, Evelyn had been blind — trusting him completely, believing his charm and his lies.
But now, reborn and awake, she sees every red flag for what it is.
She’s not the naive woman who funded his affairs.
She’s the woman who came back to take everything he stole — with interest.


Part 9: The Shift

“Fine,” she says flatly.
Crane’s eyes light up, mistaking her calm for submission. He tries to hug her, confident that she’s still “his Evelyn.”
But when he reaches out — she steps aside.
His arms catch only air.
The confusion on his face is priceless.
“What’s your problem? I slaved over dinner and you won’t even let me touch you?”
Evelyn doesn’t even look at him.
“No problem,” she says coldly. “She’s my daughter. I’ll send her the money myself.”


Part 10: The Reborn Woman

And just like that, the tables turn.
For the first time in twenty years, Evelyn keeps her own money — and her power.
She’s no longer a victim of lies or manipulation.
This time, she’s the one writing the story.
And before she’s done, every liar — her husband, his mistress, their secret family — will pay for what they did.
Because this life, Evelyn Holloway isn’t dying in filth.
She’s living for vengeance.

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