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Spoiled by Neglect 7

Spoiled by Neglect 7

I’m not going to any hospital. I’m going to New York.” 

I forced it out through gritted teeth, using every ounce of strength I had left

Crane stopped wiping. The fake warmth drained from his face in an instant

Don’t. Push. Me.His face went dark. He threw the towel down. You’re burning up with a hundredandthree fever. What the hell are you gonna do in New Yorkdie and make Naomi look like a monster for the rest of her life? Is that the plan?” 

Every word was venom

I was shakingfever or rage, I couldn’t tell anymore

Hospital or New York. Pick one.” 

I stared at him, repeating myself word by word

We were at a standoff

He was betting I’d break first. I was ready to burn it all down

Then his phone buzzed

He glanced at the screen and his whole face meltedthis soft, tender look I’d never seen before

He grabbed his phone and bolted to the balcony, sliding the door shut like he was hiding 

treasure

Hey, Mirandano, no, don’t worry, I’m almost doneYeah, I’ll be there soon, I promiseTyler’s birthday present? Already wrapped. He’s gonna flip” 

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You Send Your Daughter 

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Chapter

His voice was low but I caught every word

Miranda

Tyler

So that was her name. Their kid’s name

Today was that little boy’s birthday

Perfect

I’d been locked up, beaten, burning alive with feverand he was rushing off to play Daddy at some other kid’s birthday party

My vision blurred. The room tilted

I knew I was going under

With whatever I had left, I grabbed my phone and dialed from muscle memory

Naomi

Ringringring… 

Forever. I didn’t know if she picked up

Naomibaby, help meyour dad’she’s lost his mind” 

The phone slipped. Hit the floor

Everything went black

I woke up drowning in bleach smell

White ceiling. White walls. IV needle jabbed in my hand

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You Send Your Daughter saK MA—– 

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Hospital

Crane was sitting right there beside me, holding a fruit knife, peeling an apple with a blank expression

The blade scrapedshk, shk, shkloud as nails on a chalkboard

He saw I was awake, he didn’t even look up

Well, look who’s alive. Like a damn cockroach.He smirked. And I get stuck with the bill. What a pain in the ass.” 

I stared at this manthe man I thought I’d grow old with

All I felt was nothing

I ignored him and tried to sit up, looking for my phone

Looking for this? Gonna call your precious daughter?

Crane stopped peeling. Pulled my phone out of his pocket, dangling it like a toy

Save yourself the trouble. She already called. I answered.” 

A smug grin spread across his face

Told her you threw a tantrum and took a little spill. You know what she did?” 

He leaned in close, voice dropping to a whisper

She didn’t say a word. Just hung up.” 

Evelynyour baby girl doesn’t give a flying fuck if you live or die.” 

She thinks you’re a cheap, crazy bitch who makes scenes.” 

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You Send Your Daughter $3K Monthly 

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It felt like he’d driven a spike through my chest

I didn’t believe him

I couldn’t

This had to be another lie. Another knife in the back

I closed my eyes. I couldn’t look at his face anymore

I had to survive this

I had to talk to Naomi myself

I had to show her who this bastard really was

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Spoiled by Neglect

Spoiled by Neglect

Status: Ongoing

Part 1: The Final Moments

Evelyn dies in misery — paralyzed, helpless, lying in her own filth in a nursing home.
Her only visitor is her daughter Naomi, who stares down at her with hatred instead of love.

“You only sent me two hundred dollars a month at NYU,” Naomi sneers, waving a receipt. “So guess what? I’ll buy you the cheapest urn I can find — for two hundred.”
Her laughter echoes as she leaves. Evelyn tries to speak, to explain, but only wheezing escapes her lips.
And just like that, she dies — alone, heartbroken, branded a monster mother.


Part 2: The Funeral Lies

Even in death, there is no peace.
At her funeral, whispers swirl like smoke:

“She was so cold.”
“Starved her daughter through college.”
“All she ever cared about was money.”
No one knows the truth. No one wants to.
Because the truth is uglier than the lie — and it starts with her husband.


Part 3: The Hidden Truth

Evelyn had sent her daughter three thousand dollars every month.
But her “honest” husband, Crane Holloway, had stolen twenty-four hundred of it each time, sending only six hundred to Naomi.
Then, to make it worse, he told their daughter that Evelyn had cut her allowance — painting her as stingy and cruel.
And where did the money go?
Straight into funding his secret mistress and their second family across town.


Part 4: The Rebirth

The last breath fades…
Then she wakes up — back in her younger body — the exact day she’s about to send Naomi her first college allowance.
For a moment, disbelief floods her chest.
Then fury replaces it.
This time, she swears, no one will take advantage of her again.


Part 5: The Manipulator Returns

“Babe, just Venmo me the cash and I’ll send it all to Naomi in one go,”
Crane calls casually from the kitchen, wearing that same fake smile he always did — the “good guy” act that once fooled her.
He even adds, “I’ll throw in an extra two thousand so she doesn’t have to penny-pinch.”
Last lifetime, that charm had worked.
This lifetime? Not a chance.


Part 6: The Moment of Clarity

Looking at him now — the man she once called her soulmate — Evelyn sees every lie, every manipulation, every stolen cent.
His eyes give him away — the greed, the hidden calculation, the smirk behind his “loving” mask.
This was the exact moment her downfall began before.
Not this time.

“Sure,” she says softly. “Three thousand.”
He beams, believing he’s fooled her again.


Part 7: The Parasite’s Routine

Crane launches into his next act:

“Hey babe, mind shooting me another five grand from your checking? I’m tapped out — need some new fall gear.”
He rubs his hands together, playing the helpless husband card.
Evelyn has heard it all before — every excuse, every “you’re too busy to handle money.”
She remembers it now: how he’d insisted she let him manage her paycheck “for the family.”
She’d been a full-time worker, the only breadwinner, while he sat at home pretending to be her financial protector.
He wasn’t managing her money — he was bleeding her dry.


Part 8: The Realization

In her past life, Evelyn had been blind — trusting him completely, believing his charm and his lies.
But now, reborn and awake, she sees every red flag for what it is.
She’s not the naive woman who funded his affairs.
She’s the woman who came back to take everything he stole — with interest.


Part 9: The Shift

“Fine,” she says flatly.
Crane’s eyes light up, mistaking her calm for submission. He tries to hug her, confident that she’s still “his Evelyn.”
But when he reaches out — she steps aside.
His arms catch only air.
The confusion on his face is priceless.
“What’s your problem? I slaved over dinner and you won’t even let me touch you?”
Evelyn doesn’t even look at him.
“No problem,” she says coldly. “She’s my daughter. I’ll send her the money myself.”


Part 10: The Reborn Woman

And just like that, the tables turn.
For the first time in twenty years, Evelyn keeps her own money — and her power.
She’s no longer a victim of lies or manipulation.
This time, she’s the one writing the story.
And before she’s done, every liar — her husband, his mistress, their secret family — will pay for what they did.
Because this life, Evelyn Holloway isn’t dying in filth.
She’s living for vengeance.

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