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Spoiled by Neglect 9

Spoiled by Neglect 9

Oh my God, six hundred dollars a month? That’s brutal.” 

Look at her designer clothes and she treats her own daughter like garbage.” 

You really can’t judge a book by its cover, huh?” 

I watched my daughter break down sobbing, and it felt like someone was carving out my heart with a dull knife

Every explanation I could possibly give felt pathetic and hollow in that moment

With everyone staring, I used every ounce of strength I had left and dropped to my knees in front of her

NaomiI’m so sorryThis is all my fault.” 

Please. Just give me a chance to explain.” 

The world went silent

Everyone froze

Even Naomi stood there in shock, tears still streaming down her face, like she couldn’t process what she was seeing

Finally, one of her friends snapped out of it and rushed over to help me up, fumbling awkwardly

Naomi bit her lip. A long, awful silence stretched between us

Then, she forced out a single word through gritted teeth

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Fine.” 

We sat across from each other in a coffee shop near campus

I didn’t immediately launch into defensive explanations. Instead, I pulled out the evidence 

I’d been carrying with me

I slid a thick stack of bank transfer records across the table

Every single one showed money moving from MY paycheck into Crane’s accountthe one supposedly designated for household expenses.” 

Each transaction was clearly labeled Daughter’s living expenses.” 

Amounts ranging from three to five thousand dollars. Every month

What is thisNaomi stared at the bank statements, confusion flooding her eyes

Then I pulled out the second piece of evidence

The photos the PI had taken

Crane with Miranda. Crane with that kid Tyler

Their perfect little family playing happy together

Finally, I unbuttoned the top of my shirt, exposing the vicious bruises that still hadn’t fully faded

Naomi, your father told you I threw a tantrum and fell down.” 

The truth is, he locked me in a storage closet for over twentyfour hours without food or water. He did this to me.” 

Naomi’s face went sheetwhite

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Her hands started trembling as she picked up the photos one by one, studying them like she could burn holes through the paper

Soso everything he said was a lie?Her voice was barely a whisper

He said you thought I was spending too much, so you’d only give me a thousand a month. Then he cut it to six hundred.” 

He said you’d come home from work in a bad mood and take it out on me. That you were upset I got into school in New York.” 

He said youhated me.” 

I shook my head, tears sliding silently down my face

I never did. Not once. Naomi, you’re my pride and joy.” 

I told her about the phone call I’d made right before passing out from feverI’d actually called her friend Chloe

So I never believed a word Crane said about her not caring

Naomi’s eyes went wide. She immediately pulled out her phone and called Chloe

On the other end, Chloe recounted what had actually happened that daya completely different story from Crane’s version

Your dad answered and said your mom was drunk and acting crazy, told us to ignore it. I knew something felt wrong, but when I called back nobody picked up” 

The truth came crashing down

Every misunderstanding, every moment of resentmentit all collapsed under the weight of cold, hard facts

Naomi covered her face with her hands and let out a strangled, agonized sob

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I couldn’t hold back anymore either. I pulled her into my arms, and we sat there in that 

coffee shop corner crying our hearts out

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Spoiled by Neglect

Spoiled by Neglect

Status: Ongoing

Part 1: The Final Moments

Evelyn dies in misery — paralyzed, helpless, lying in her own filth in a nursing home.
Her only visitor is her daughter Naomi, who stares down at her with hatred instead of love.

“You only sent me two hundred dollars a month at NYU,” Naomi sneers, waving a receipt. “So guess what? I’ll buy you the cheapest urn I can find — for two hundred.”
Her laughter echoes as she leaves. Evelyn tries to speak, to explain, but only wheezing escapes her lips.
And just like that, she dies — alone, heartbroken, branded a monster mother.


Part 2: The Funeral Lies

Even in death, there is no peace.
At her funeral, whispers swirl like smoke:

“She was so cold.”
“Starved her daughter through college.”
“All she ever cared about was money.”
No one knows the truth. No one wants to.
Because the truth is uglier than the lie — and it starts with her husband.


Part 3: The Hidden Truth

Evelyn had sent her daughter three thousand dollars every month.
But her “honest” husband, Crane Holloway, had stolen twenty-four hundred of it each time, sending only six hundred to Naomi.
Then, to make it worse, he told their daughter that Evelyn had cut her allowance — painting her as stingy and cruel.
And where did the money go?
Straight into funding his secret mistress and their second family across town.


Part 4: The Rebirth

The last breath fades…
Then she wakes up — back in her younger body — the exact day she’s about to send Naomi her first college allowance.
For a moment, disbelief floods her chest.
Then fury replaces it.
This time, she swears, no one will take advantage of her again.


Part 5: The Manipulator Returns

“Babe, just Venmo me the cash and I’ll send it all to Naomi in one go,”
Crane calls casually from the kitchen, wearing that same fake smile he always did — the “good guy” act that once fooled her.
He even adds, “I’ll throw in an extra two thousand so she doesn’t have to penny-pinch.”
Last lifetime, that charm had worked.
This lifetime? Not a chance.


Part 6: The Moment of Clarity

Looking at him now — the man she once called her soulmate — Evelyn sees every lie, every manipulation, every stolen cent.
His eyes give him away — the greed, the hidden calculation, the smirk behind his “loving” mask.
This was the exact moment her downfall began before.
Not this time.

“Sure,” she says softly. “Three thousand.”
He beams, believing he’s fooled her again.


Part 7: The Parasite’s Routine

Crane launches into his next act:

“Hey babe, mind shooting me another five grand from your checking? I’m tapped out — need some new fall gear.”
He rubs his hands together, playing the helpless husband card.
Evelyn has heard it all before — every excuse, every “you’re too busy to handle money.”
She remembers it now: how he’d insisted she let him manage her paycheck “for the family.”
She’d been a full-time worker, the only breadwinner, while he sat at home pretending to be her financial protector.
He wasn’t managing her money — he was bleeding her dry.


Part 8: The Realization

In her past life, Evelyn had been blind — trusting him completely, believing his charm and his lies.
But now, reborn and awake, she sees every red flag for what it is.
She’s not the naive woman who funded his affairs.
She’s the woman who came back to take everything he stole — with interest.


Part 9: The Shift

“Fine,” she says flatly.
Crane’s eyes light up, mistaking her calm for submission. He tries to hug her, confident that she’s still “his Evelyn.”
But when he reaches out — she steps aside.
His arms catch only air.
The confusion on his face is priceless.
“What’s your problem? I slaved over dinner and you won’t even let me touch you?”
Evelyn doesn’t even look at him.
“No problem,” she says coldly. “She’s my daughter. I’ll send her the money myself.”


Part 10: The Reborn Woman

And just like that, the tables turn.
For the first time in twenty years, Evelyn keeps her own money — and her power.
She’s no longer a victim of lies or manipulation.
This time, she’s the one writing the story.
And before she’s done, every liar — her husband, his mistress, their secret family — will pay for what they did.
Because this life, Evelyn Holloway isn’t dying in filth.
She’s living for vengeance.

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